Research and planning: Presentation of proposals

After presenting the two proposals for my horror film trailer, with my partner, to my Media teacher, we were told  that both proposal were good and the first proposal could be said to be based on a true story as  its was once said that a young man has committed suicide in the building and can be said that hi ghost hunts the college. we have decided to merge both proposal in one starting off with the first proposal in college and carrying on with the second for the other part of the trailer. After getting this feedback from the teacher I decided I would try and get even more feedback from members of my target audience and target age range.